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My Alpha Wants Two Lunas? I'm Done!: Relationships at the Start

Laila's Year of Care Goes Unrecognized

Meet them in the first five chapters See the ebook edition

This opening note focuses on the first paragraphs of chapter 1. The free reading sample contains five complete chapters.

Relationships in the opening

Laila's Year of Care Goes Unrecognized

Holt explains his commitment to Maris through their shared battlefield experience, while Laila recalls promises made before his departure and the care she gave his mother at home. His account credits Maris with his mother's improved health without meaningfully acknowledging that work. The relationship fracture therefore involves competing definitions of devotion: visible companionship in war receives recognition, while the less visible support Laila describes is treated as insufficient grounds for her hurt.

Whose contributions does Holt readily recognize, and how does he respond when Laila names her own?

Read the scene in chapter 1